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Dream
By: Adam M. Snow

I dream of her, and then I sever;
I dream of her now and forever.
Wrung ye not of dreams be seen,
Joyous past of hope between.

Misery held but a fiend, but a fiend;
Vision of her but a dream, but a dream.
But do I see her now or never;
Dream of her now and forever.

Dark despair around benights me;
Dreams of her, bestowed upon me.
Ne'er the day nor twilight fall;
One poise adjourned for all-
A dream to come tomorrow's pass,
Each heavier than the last.

I dream of her, and then I sever;
I dream of her now and forever.
Wrung ye not of dreams be seen,
Joyous past of hope between.

Alas! Misery held but a fiend, but a fiend;
Vision of her but a dream, but a dream.
Arose ye not a dream to wander,
A vision of her going yonder.

Dark despair around benights me;
Dreams of her, bestowed upon me.
Ev'ry dream it be of her;
Dream of her now and forever.
:iconbornanimefreak:
I was inspired by the poem 'Ae Fond Kiss by Roberts Burns' to write this. Please comment or critique it, tell me what you think?
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:iconmichaelpaulingram:
I scanned the comments to see if anyone else caught on to the likeness of Poe and of course they did, who wouldn't ha. I very much enjoyed this read! Keep up the amazing work.
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~BornAnimeFreak Mar 3, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you
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Mood: Delighted ~Haru01 Dec 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Dude this is very deep. Very well done. :D
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~BornAnimeFreak Dec 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you
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Mood: Joy ~Haru01 Dec 19, 2012  Professional Writer
You're welcome :D
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:iconwillsydneyporter:
I enjoyed the Poesque nature of the content, very dark and gloomy...reminds me a bit of Lord Byron as well. I'm not an avid reader of Bobby Burns but I have read a few of his works. I think you capture the emotion well here.
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~BornAnimeFreak Nov 25, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you
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*Clavis-Salomonis Jul 4, 2012  Student General Artist
You have been featured here: [link] :)
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Mood: Love ~Xirion May 15, 2012  Student Writer
Really a wonderful poem~ I love your choice of words!
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Very well done.
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